Score: 3

"Poor"

submission: Wegra Adventure 5

date: September 20, 2008

The animation and drawing is abysmal and is more of a comic than a movie. At least you had music which made it a little more interesting and the random plot was ok but overall this a poor flash that not many people will enjoy watching.

work on it, a lot

3/10
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Score: 8

"good game good idea"

submission: Frustration: Mouse Killah

date: September 19, 2008

the gameplay had quite a innovative twist and i enjoyed it but I found the menu spinnig wheel thing a bit confusing and I didn't jnow what I was doing. The game was also very hard after the first practice stage so maybe try a choice of difficulty. Still great game

8/10
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Score: 6

"Pretty cool"

submission: PINEAPPLE

date: September 18, 2008

The animation is nice and clean. There was no story but it was good enough to keep me watching.
The musics ok but yah tune your guitar a bit although it doesnt sound too bad as it is.

I'm guessing this is just a test thing so I know you'll make better stuff but still well done for the good animation. I'd still watch it over some noobs stick animation that he spent ages on.

6/10
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Score: 2

"Stupid"

submission: The Dot Of Excellence 6

date: September 18, 2008

Well I couldn't really understand anything. Try to record your own voice because speakonia ones get really annoying too. The animation was minimal and had loads of things wrong with it, loads of stuff was sticking out where it shouldn't be so that definetly needs to be fixed.

I guess if I understood the story that could be ok, a flash about the BBS but without better animation no-one will care. I say forget this Dot of excellence bull and start something new which requires more animation.

2/10
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Score: 8

"nice dress-up"

submission: Dress Our King!

date: September 6, 2008

This would have to be one of the est dressups Ive seen on NG. The quality is excellent and you gave the audience a massive selection of clotes, music and backgrounds.

However, I think you might have inclued a few too many songs as the flash is lagging a bit so maybe get rid of a couple to reduce the filesize. The preloader was really good too and there wasn't much wrong with the flash at all.

Really well done for making something of this high calibur for clock day.

8/10
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Score: 6

"Good idea"

submission: Clyde's Revenge

date: September 6, 2008

I like games like this but I have to say yours was very rough. It lagged a lot too, which was k ind of annyoing but I guess you can't do much to stop that.

The menu was a bit dull and reckless too so if you could clean that up and make it look sexier, this game would llook more professiona land recieve better scores.

Nice work so far though

6/10
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Score: 8

"Some great ideas here."

submission: Newgrounds Intro Collab

date: September 6, 2008

I can't remember which one was which but I see a lot of great, inspiring ideas for NG intros. Some of them animated superbly. The tankman one proably being the most thoroughly animated. I liked the skateboard one too although I dont see it being used as the skating is a bit irrelevant.

Bit of criticism: Bevelled text hardly ever looks good so I wouldn't use it in an intro. Best to keep in plain and simple

Overall, great collab, great ideas.

8/10
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Score: 5

"Nice message"

submission: Ode to Elevator Music

date: September 6, 2008

And lovely music but you could have maybe included the introduction you included in the description as I kind of story at the beginning to make the flashless empty. Plus a lot of people don't read the description and could vote lower than this deserves.

It's a nice idea but the words themselves seem a little off center. That should be easy to sort out. And yes I was looking for an anagram too heh, you could have maybe rephrased the message to bean anagram somehow, that woul be even better.

5/10
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Score: 8

"Really Good"

submission: The Dropping Egg Collab

date: September 6, 2008

I really enjoyed watching this. The animation and all the different types of egg looked great I liked the clouds too

The music was sort of fitting in a bizarre kindof way which added to the amusement. However when the egg finally cracked (beautifully I must say) You should have stopped the music and added a breaking sound effect for impact.

The menu was creative and well made too as the addictive Easter Egg that I found after watching the second time.

Overall this is a really good collab with some great animation. well done.

8/10
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Score: 5

"Well done."

submission: Gein kills the kk

date: September 6, 2008

Well I wouldn't call this a good movie but it wa inda funny and well done for killing the KK. I think it took too long for you to actually shoot the cat, i felt like closing the flash but when it came, it looked quite good.
Not much of a flash but a good idea so

5/10
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