Score: 5

"Decent for a clock dy flash"

submission: A new clock!

date: September 6, 2008

Not the greatest clock day flash, it was very short but I don't blame you as there were many worse entries.

The animation was very clean and smooth and the sounds were in-sync. The grpahics were simple yet effective. You could improve them to give the movie more depth.

So yeah this wasn't bad at all.

5/10
Marsupial
Review Request Club

Score: 7

"Helpful for noobs i guess"

submission: Being a Helpful NG'er

date: September 5, 2008

I didn't find it very interesting as I know all these things so te RRC wouldnt be the best place to advertise this as there are mostly experienced users there who already know about everything you mentioned here.

However I did like the way you et out the infrmation and the way it was written. Very professional actually but the buttons looked a bit dodgy. I can design you some for future projects if you need, just pm.

Still, its a helpful guide

7/10
Marsupial
Review Request Club

Score: 7

"A decent quiz"

submission: Newgrounds Helpful Guide

date: September 5, 2008

To be honest I think this is a bit overated. it's just a simple short quiz with a NG spin. But how well it did isnt something I can critisize you on.

The presentation was nice and clean but the results at the end looked a bit m essy so perhaps fix that. And maybe make the quiz its self longer and more deep so people can get an accurate review of what kind of newgrounder they are.

Still its a good idea for a quiz that Ive actually seen done before but Ill let that pass.

7/10
Marsupial
Review Request Club

Score: 2

"Stupid"

submission: Wegra Adventure 4

date: September 5, 2008

I don't know how old you are but I would expect my 9 year old brothers comics to better this animation. The humour is childish and not in a good lighthearted way. its just stupid. I could even bear watching it to the end. The visuals were painful and the music was getting annoying.

After that broom bullshit I doubted this was going to get any better so i closed the movie and started writing this.

I'm giving you a couple of points as you probably put some effort into making this but i still think its awful

thank you and goodbye

2/10
Marsupial
Review Request Club

Score: 3

"god"

submission: The Last Hour: Chapter 9

date: September 5, 2008

Im getting tired of reviewing these because theyve all been the same apart from 10.

the graphics are good but the lack of any action and more intense animation is quite painful which is why this will never be that popular. Plus I don't really like the theme either. I like Star wars but this is a bit stupid. Be more original. You know what Im saying in general this is like the 5th review ive left you lmao.

3/10
Marsupial
Review Request Club

Score: 5

"Boring again."

submission: The Last Hour: Chapter 8

date: September 5, 2008

You have proven yourseelf on the drawing side of things but you need more action. There is minimal animation, which makes me think that you didn't put a lot of effort into this. just did a movie clip of the main bug character moving around while talking. Not very hard to do at all and not intersting either.

I know your chapter 10 was a lot better but you should have thought this series through more before starting it as the episodes are too short and boring.

therefore i cant give you a high score for this

5/10
Marsupial
Review Request Club

Score: 8

"haha much better man"

submission: The Last Hour: Chapter 10

date: August 28, 2008

once again i dont understand whats going but thats hardly your fault. this was a really good flash, I enjoyed it. The animation is looking quite clean and proffesional. i was really impressed.

and the audio was great. from the western level of timesplitters im guessing? well anyway it was awesome and even sort of insync with the flash. Im gonna add this to my favourites and one day ill watch the whole series. i dont have much to criticze you on actually. the voice acting was actually ok but could use a little touching up.

keep making em

8/10
Marsupial

Score: 7

"funny"

submission: Forever Young

date: August 26, 2008

i might have seen the ending coming but it was still funny. the graphics were really nice, the kitchen looked great and well done on drawing that reflection so well.

something about the animation was a bit odd, looked just a bit jagged. try speeding up the fps just a bit.

This was a great idea though, id love to see more stuff like this. Th preloader also loked good btw, did you make that.

so well done for that refreshing movie

7/10
Marsupial
Review Request Club

Score: 4

"very boring"

submission: The Last Hour: Chapter 7

date: August 26, 2008

from what ive seen your episode solely contain of "what happened previously" and a drawing of two people talking. agan i could not understand a thing and the whole thing was painful to watch.

although the actual draing looked pretty good you cant expect peiple to put up with this. you must inclue some action or nobody will watch anymore. if no action, you could at least add a couple of spoofs to keep your audience. i could just go and watch a real star wars film or wahtever this is supposed to be and id be getting 500% more of a thrill. so really youre bringing nothing to the table.

work on it

4/10

Marsupial

RRC

Score: 5

"meh not great"

submission: The Last Hour: Chapter 6

date: August 26, 2008

not the good, the spaceship and the planet looked allright but the stars were retarded and the people could have been drawn better and the camera could have switched to the other guy talking but atleast you lipsynced.

kudos for using the timesplitters music though i love that game.

i havent watched the other episodes so i didnt know what was going on but optional subtitles would help as the voices are quite unclear. And you should make it a bit longer, and give it a some action apart from talking to keep people interested.

overall not too bad i can see this is your first project and you have a lot of improving to do

5/10

Marsupial

RRC