Score: 5

"Ouch"

submission: A Newgrounds X-mas Story

date: January 21, 2007

(- The Good -)

Decent graphics, you actually tried hard with the opening and it showed. Song was OK, good quality sound and so on.
It was also your first flash, and you did quite well for a first :)

(- The Bad -)

Took ages to long and was painful to watch because it was so slow. You should try to keep the size as low as possible. My crappy computer couldn't really handle it. Flashes based on flash documents are getting really boring, you should try to create your own character. Also the snow was dodgy.

(-- Overall --)

A good effort for your first flash, it needs improvement and for gods skae lower the filesize, some people DO have bottom of the ladder, crap computers. ;)

(-- Review Request Club--)

Score: 6

"Pretty funny."

submission: CornFlakes

date: January 20, 2007

(- The Good -)

Quite funny and nice voices, and characters. I like the way that the main character just shrugged his shoulders and walked off after finding all his friends dead, that was funny.

(- The Bad -)

The graphics weren't that bad they were a bit lopsided and need a lot of improvement, including more detailed drawings. The pre-loader had nothing to do with the actual flash. At what point did that guy have a gun? Also the skip button was very tempting. I pressed it and missed part of the flash. That was unnescesarry.

(-- Overall --)

A quite funny, quite random flash with good voice, but on a whole, it needs plenty of work to be a serious contender.

(--- Review Request Club ---)

Score: 7

"Original"

submission: Brain Damage!!

date: January 17, 2007

(- The Good -)

Solid visuals, good chice of song. The movie is very original and pretty random. But in a good way.

(- The Bad -)

Preloader needs work and the animation, is smooth but a bit weird. Apart from the a good, twisred animation.

(-- Overall --)

Messed with my head a bit, but great. Good stuff.

(--- Review Request Club ---)

Score: 4

"What was that?"

submission: ~BB~ Super Adventure #2

date: January 13, 2007

(- The Good -)

Nice music, the bit that was supposed to be shocking succeded in being shocking.

(- The Bad -)

Not even a real flash, not much proper animation, too random, the image and sound quality was poor and it was way too short.

(- Overall -)

The last part raised a dry smilie, but apart from that this is a poor flash with no real effort. What's the song at the beginning called?

Score: 6

"Nice try"

submission: Homeland

date: January 8, 2007

{- The good -}

I like the way you used your own song, the movie had a nice message to it and the concept was good.

{- Improvements -}

The visuals were pretty shoddy and the animation poor, and you could have had sound effects along the music, as the music is pretty basic and simple. If your serious about making movies, take more time on them.

{- Overall -}

Pleaty of room for improvement, but this remains a decent flash that deserved to get through the portal.

{-- Review Request Club --}

Score: 7

"OK"

submission: VT - East Park

date: January 7, 2007

It wasn't bad, I think that you drew all the characters really well, but in some parts the animation was quite rugged, the voics were OK, but I found them annoying, not a patch on the original South Park (obviously)
For some reason you put a play button half way through the film which was completely unnecessary.
For your next flash, you should sit down, and write a better, funnier script because this one, althought it wasn't that bad, was all a bit on-the-spot dry humour.
I want to see more.

{- Review Request Club -}

Score: 6

"Too easy"

submission: The Marble Game 2

date: December 18, 2006

The game was good although far too easy, the animation was slick, and the presentation was tidy, you could have included an option to modify the difficulty by altering the speed of the cups. The title of the game is misleading, you should have thought of something else, also the music that you used was inappropriate, that track without the vocals, just an instrumental could have worked well.
Overall you made a solid game that people won't play for very long because of the low difficulty bar.

Score: 7

"Challenging"

submission: Apple Eater

date: December 18, 2006

You put together an addicting but equally frustrating game, I soon lost intrest because of my over sensetive mouse, and I didn't want to change the responsivity in the control panel. However, I like the sound effects that you used, all very suitable, although you could have used colourful backgrounds and powerups, music would also help make the game more enjoyable.

Score: 8

"Good, good"

submission: Destructionized

date: November 24, 2006

This flash had basically everything it needed. The remote control section was great, and some of the effects you used were also great, such sa the part where the main character was hunched over in the desert, and his shoulders were bobbing up and down. The little menu thing was a nice touch, and helped me realise how much effort you put into this flash as I watched some psrts frame by frame.
Also the music was most appropriate, such as the metal at hte beggining, and the RHCP light rock during the shooting mini-game, however it seemed to fade away. The flash wasn't really high quality, but all the stuff that you threw in still made it good, well done.

{- Review request crew -}

Score: 9

"Simply amazing"

submission: Blockhead: Episode 8

date: November 17, 2006

Your flashes get better evey time, the visuals are detailed and charming as ever. Blockhead's voice is great and really suits him. you should have gotten a girl to to that woman's voice, it sounded really dodgy, I will look forward to seeing episode 9.