Marsupial's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Stalin Movie]

wow the intro was too long

but you used the music from GTA4 lol.

good first attempt, wat mark did you get?

Dj-MnM responds:

10/10 only because the teacher hadn't anything like it before. I knew that it wasn't that good but everyone kept telling me it was awesome. there standards are way lower than yours

[Sherbert the Cat Pat-Day]

Interesting...

At first I thought this is going to be one of those random gay flashes when I saw the first part but then I learnt it was only an intro. The actual flash was well designed and plotted. I quite liked it.

Your drawing is pretty good and the cat was animated well. It is harder than it looks moving four legs at a time and you did well. The sound was also ok. The music was fitting and the voices weren't too bad. Subtitles and a preloader were a good idea. Helping out your audience help YOU get more views and positive feed back. :)

However you could improve by smoothening out your graphics and animation. They weren't too good and there's always room for improvement. The voices were ok but could have been done better with more talented voice actors and more accurate lip-sycning. I also don't think the beginning part of the flash was kind of un-neseccary and looked bad in my view.

6/10

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Jonimator responds:

thanks for your detailed review, it's very helpful!

[Korean Love Story]

If only love was that simple...

(- The Good -)

Your style was a bit simple but it worked really well and I like some of the effects you used like 3D, cheeks blushing and the ripples in the girls skirt.
The song was also very nice and the animatiopn didn't need voices at all. I just wish I knew what it meant. Oh and I like the way you provided the English translation after the korean writing.
the story was very nice and it was reasonably lenghty. A bit sad at the beginning and sorta cliched at the end but I still liked it. You're movie actually has a decent storyline, many movies do not.

(- The Bad -)

I can't remember if there was a preloader but if not you should have put one there, along with a play button but I'm sorry if there was.
The bobbing up and down was an excuse not to draw the girl bunny walking. I know it's hard but what you did still worked allright. I have no idea why the bunnies didn't have shoes, their legs looked quite weird from up-close.
The credits looked pretty rushed, a difference form the rest of your movie. You could have mad a nice, faded background, including the two bunnies together, smiles on their faces.

(-- Overall --)

If there was a way I could give you points for story, that would be your highest mark. Still, the animation was OK and you took your time.

7/10

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Kenzu responds:

-There is a preloader.
-If I were to show the whole body, then people would loose focus on the details.
-bunnies don't wear shoes, because they are bunnies, but these characters were catgirl and catboy.

(Shoes wouldn't look nice on cats)

Thanks for the review.