Marsupial's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[In my mind]

Amazing

A really experimental concept but i loved it, the music made it a bit dark and mysterious too and the text at the end supported this. I love the way the music synced so nicely with what was happeneing like a psychadelic music video.
You're obviously very talented so I'm gonna keep watching your work I like your quick but clean animation style. Nice menu too.

9/10
Marsupial
Review Request Club

Lochie responds:

Thank you very much for the 9, thank you for reviewing, and thank you VERY much for the great review.

:D

[Camp Madness]

Loved it

The animation was excellent, you had your own twist to it although it remained in the madness style. I laughed at the end and the audio was really good too. Somehow the blood doesn't look bloody enough so my maybe work on that.

Short but fantastic flash though, I like what you did with the preloader too

9/10
Marsupial

Wonchop responds:

Well I'm not very good at drawing blood atm and didn't really want to add blood stains to all those drawings.

[Castle Crashers Halloween]

Pretty funny

the animation was decent enough and the plot was nice. I liked the voice acting and the credits at the end were good too.
It's a bit early but still a good flash, well done.

7/10
Marsupial
Review Request Club

Lazyfeet responds:

Review Request Club? I requested a review? Awesome :C

[Newgrounds Intro Collab]

Some great ideas here.

I can't remember which one was which but I see a lot of great, inspiring ideas for NG intros. Some of them animated superbly. The tankman one proably being the most thoroughly animated. I liked the skateboard one too although I dont see it being used as the skating is a bit irrelevant.

Bit of criticism: Bevelled text hardly ever looks good so I wouldn't use it in an intro. Best to keep in plain and simple

Overall, great collab, great ideas.

8/10
Marsupial
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Insanimation responds:

Thanks for the review!

[Ode to Elevator Music]

Nice message

And lovely music but you could have maybe included the introduction you included in the description as I kind of story at the beginning to make the flashless empty. Plus a lot of people don't read the description and could vote lower than this deserves.

It's a nice idea but the words themselves seem a little off center. That should be easy to sort out. And yes I was looking for an anagram too heh, you could have maybe rephrased the message to bean anagram somehow, that woul be even better.

5/10
Marsupial
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SprintT responds:

Saddly I can redo the message to be an anagram. The meaning of my phrase requires it to be as such. Maybe I will make an anagram series though!

Also thankyou for the advice, and the kind words.

[A new clock!]

Decent for a clock dy flash

Not the greatest clock day flash, it was very short but I don't blame you as there were many worse entries.

The animation was very clean and smooth and the sounds were in-sync. The grpahics were simple yet effective. You could improve them to give the movie more depth.

So yeah this wasn't bad at all.

5/10
Marsupial
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sistem69 responds:

Thanks for the review.

[The Last Hour: Chapter 7]

very boring

from what ive seen your episode solely contain of "what happened previously" and a drawing of two people talking. agan i could not understand a thing and the whole thing was painful to watch.

although the actual draing looked pretty good you cant expect peiple to put up with this. you must inclue some action or nobody will watch anymore. if no action, you could at least add a couple of spoofs to keep your audience. i could just go and watch a real star wars film or wahtever this is supposed to be and id be getting 500% more of a thrill. so really youre bringing nothing to the table.

work on it

4/10

Marsupial

RRC

Jaiba responds:

Hey

I know you've doubt my work before, but let make show you one final movie to redeem myself. Let me show you for one last time that I do listen to my reviewers and I do respect you. I'd admit my old work wasn't all that good, and I was just learning, but after working hard for countless hours I finally bring you something i'm proud of. This is the last chapter of the season for this series. Let me tell you some improvements on the movie. THERE IS NO INTRO, NONE AT ALL. NO ANNOYING BORING INTRO. It just starts right away, it is exactly 3 minutes long. Full of intense action, better voice acting, great music that syncs with the movie. It's almost like a music video. Much better drawings and special effects and you will see that. Frame by Frame and more. I think this movie will change your mind about me, and I hope I can get back some of my old viewers who I upset. Please give this last movie a chance. If you think it is spam or crappy you can block me and never ever watch my movies again. If however you think it's acceptable, please give it a review i'd appreciate it. Please, please watch and review it. This is my last movie for the season. I can promise you it will be a vast improvement from my other movies, heck you won't even think I did it, but yeah it's all me. I'm sorry that I wasn't too nice to my reviewers. Please forgive me. I was arrogant and wrong.

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /457202

-Jaiba

[The Last Hour: Chapter 6]

meh not great

not the good, the spaceship and the planet looked allright but the stars were retarded and the people could have been drawn better and the camera could have switched to the other guy talking but atleast you lipsynced.

kudos for using the timesplitters music though i love that game.

i havent watched the other episodes so i didnt know what was going on but optional subtitles would help as the voices are quite unclear. And you should make it a bit longer, and give it a some action apart from talking to keep people interested.

overall not too bad i can see this is your first project and you have a lot of improving to do

5/10

Marsupial

RRC

Jaiba responds:

check out chapter 10. fixed everything u pointed out and much better 3 minutes long, no intro

[Narrative Flash Remake]

done well

the menu was ok but a bit dull, the audio was good, the backgrounds were ok, the poems were good and the flash took a suprisingly long time to load heh.

not much else i can say about this but well done still

7/10

Marsupial

RRC

SprintT responds:

Thank you, and I will work on making the menu more sexy :D
It took a while due to the full songs that I loaded (8.8MB)