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[Ode to Elevator Music]

Nice message

And lovely music but you could have maybe included the introduction you included in the description as I kind of story at the beginning to make the flashless empty. Plus a lot of people don't read the description and could vote lower than this deserves.

It's a nice idea but the words themselves seem a little off center. That should be easy to sort out. And yes I was looking for an anagram too heh, you could have maybe rephrased the message to bean anagram somehow, that woul be even better.

5/10
Marsupial
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SprintT responds:

Saddly I can redo the message to be an anagram. The meaning of my phrase requires it to be as such. Maybe I will make an anagram series though!

Also thankyou for the advice, and the kind words.

[The Dropping Egg Collab]

Really Good

I really enjoyed watching this. The animation and all the different types of egg looked great I liked the clouds too

The music was sort of fitting in a bizarre kindof way which added to the amusement. However when the egg finally cracked (beautifully I must say) You should have stopped the music and added a breaking sound effect for impact.

The menu was creative and well made too as the addictive Easter Egg that I found after watching the second time.

Overall this is a really good collab with some great animation. well done.

8/10
Marsupial
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[A new clock!]

Decent for a clock dy flash

Not the greatest clock day flash, it was very short but I don't blame you as there were many worse entries.

The animation was very clean and smooth and the sounds were in-sync. The grpahics were simple yet effective. You could improve them to give the movie more depth.

So yeah this wasn't bad at all.

5/10
Marsupial
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sistem69 responds:

Thanks for the review.

[Wegra Adventure 4]

Stupid

I don't know how old you are but I would expect my 9 year old brothers comics to better this animation. The humour is childish and not in a good lighthearted way. its just stupid. I could even bear watching it to the end. The visuals were painful and the music was getting annoying.

After that broom bullshit I doubted this was going to get any better so i closed the movie and started writing this.

I'm giving you a couple of points as you probably put some effort into making this but i still think its awful

thank you and goodbye

2/10
Marsupial
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[The Last Hour: Chapter 9]

god

Im getting tired of reviewing these because theyve all been the same apart from 10.

the graphics are good but the lack of any action and more intense animation is quite painful which is why this will never be that popular. Plus I don't really like the theme either. I like Star wars but this is a bit stupid. Be more original. You know what Im saying in general this is like the 5th review ive left you lmao.

3/10
Marsupial
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[The Last Hour: Chapter 8]

Boring again.

You have proven yourseelf on the drawing side of things but you need more action. There is minimal animation, which makes me think that you didn't put a lot of effort into this. just did a movie clip of the main bug character moving around while talking. Not very hard to do at all and not intersting either.

I know your chapter 10 was a lot better but you should have thought this series through more before starting it as the episodes are too short and boring.

therefore i cant give you a high score for this

5/10
Marsupial
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[The Last Hour: Chapter 10]

haha much better man

once again i dont understand whats going but thats hardly your fault. this was a really good flash, I enjoyed it. The animation is looking quite clean and proffesional. i was really impressed.

and the audio was great. from the western level of timesplitters im guessing? well anyway it was awesome and even sort of insync with the flash. Im gonna add this to my favourites and one day ill watch the whole series. i dont have much to criticze you on actually. the voice acting was actually ok but could use a little touching up.

keep making em

8/10
Marsupial

[The Last Hour: Chapter 7]

very boring

from what ive seen your episode solely contain of "what happened previously" and a drawing of two people talking. agan i could not understand a thing and the whole thing was painful to watch.

although the actual draing looked pretty good you cant expect peiple to put up with this. you must inclue some action or nobody will watch anymore. if no action, you could at least add a couple of spoofs to keep your audience. i could just go and watch a real star wars film or wahtever this is supposed to be and id be getting 500% more of a thrill. so really youre bringing nothing to the table.

work on it

4/10

Marsupial

RRC

Jaiba responds:

Hey

I know you've doubt my work before, but let make show you one final movie to redeem myself. Let me show you for one last time that I do listen to my reviewers and I do respect you. I'd admit my old work wasn't all that good, and I was just learning, but after working hard for countless hours I finally bring you something i'm proud of. This is the last chapter of the season for this series. Let me tell you some improvements on the movie. THERE IS NO INTRO, NONE AT ALL. NO ANNOYING BORING INTRO. It just starts right away, it is exactly 3 minutes long. Full of intense action, better voice acting, great music that syncs with the movie. It's almost like a music video. Much better drawings and special effects and you will see that. Frame by Frame and more. I think this movie will change your mind about me, and I hope I can get back some of my old viewers who I upset. Please give this last movie a chance. If you think it is spam or crappy you can block me and never ever watch my movies again. If however you think it's acceptable, please give it a review i'd appreciate it. Please, please watch and review it. This is my last movie for the season. I can promise you it will be a vast improvement from my other movies, heck you won't even think I did it, but yeah it's all me. I'm sorry that I wasn't too nice to my reviewers. Please forgive me. I was arrogant and wrong.

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /457202

-Jaiba

[The Last Hour: Chapter 6]

meh not great

not the good, the spaceship and the planet looked allright but the stars were retarded and the people could have been drawn better and the camera could have switched to the other guy talking but atleast you lipsynced.

kudos for using the timesplitters music though i love that game.

i havent watched the other episodes so i didnt know what was going on but optional subtitles would help as the voices are quite unclear. And you should make it a bit longer, and give it a some action apart from talking to keep people interested.

overall not too bad i can see this is your first project and you have a lot of improving to do

5/10

Marsupial

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Jaiba responds:

check out chapter 10. fixed everything u pointed out and much better 3 minutes long, no intro