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[Sherbert the Cat Pat-Day]

Interesting...

At first I thought this is going to be one of those random gay flashes when I saw the first part but then I learnt it was only an intro. The actual flash was well designed and plotted. I quite liked it.

Your drawing is pretty good and the cat was animated well. It is harder than it looks moving four legs at a time and you did well. The sound was also ok. The music was fitting and the voices weren't too bad. Subtitles and a preloader were a good idea. Helping out your audience help YOU get more views and positive feed back. :)

However you could improve by smoothening out your graphics and animation. They weren't too good and there's always room for improvement. The voices were ok but could have been done better with more talented voice actors and more accurate lip-sycning. I also don't think the beginning part of the flash was kind of un-neseccary and looked bad in my view.

6/10

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Jonimator responds:

thanks for your detailed review, it's very helpful!

[BlobCombat.V-tSoB]

Suprisingly good.

(- The Good -)

I liked your style of graphics. A bit factory dull but stylish. Reminded me of Madness. The characters were certainly original and I liked the way they had different personalities. The story is looking reasonably good so far.
The music was good, very sinister, mournful even. that was reminiscent of Metal Gear Solid. You included a preloader which is good. Also credits are always a nice sign.

(- The Bad -)

The flash was slightly humorous and the music doesn't suit this. You should pick one style and stick to it.
The credists should always be at the end of the flash. I found it quite boring enduring the text. Get to the pint straight away. Show the movie as soon as possible and then mess about with extras and all that.

(-- Overall --)

I wasn't expecting much from this flash but it's pretty decent. Well done.

6/10

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[Korean Love Story]

If only love was that simple...

(- The Good -)

Your style was a bit simple but it worked really well and I like some of the effects you used like 3D, cheeks blushing and the ripples in the girls skirt.
The song was also very nice and the animatiopn didn't need voices at all. I just wish I knew what it meant. Oh and I like the way you provided the English translation after the korean writing.
the story was very nice and it was reasonably lenghty. A bit sad at the beginning and sorta cliched at the end but I still liked it. You're movie actually has a decent storyline, many movies do not.

(- The Bad -)

I can't remember if there was a preloader but if not you should have put one there, along with a play button but I'm sorry if there was.
The bobbing up and down was an excuse not to draw the girl bunny walking. I know it's hard but what you did still worked allright. I have no idea why the bunnies didn't have shoes, their legs looked quite weird from up-close.
The credits looked pretty rushed, a difference form the rest of your movie. You could have mad a nice, faded background, including the two bunnies together, smiles on their faces.

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If there was a way I could give you points for story, that would be your highest mark. Still, the animation was OK and you took your time.

7/10

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Kenzu responds:

-There is a preloader.
-If I were to show the whole body, then people would loose focus on the details.
-bunnies don't wear shoes, because they are bunnies, but these characters were catgirl and catboy.

(Shoes wouldn't look nice on cats)

Thanks for the review.

[Minefield]

Ahh

You see I already reviewed the older one so this won't be a real review but I'll mention the most imprtant points again.

The graphics were crappy. Stickmen are usually rubbish unless drawn with some style instead of generic anorexics like in this one. The story was quite unclear and I didn't know what was going on. Read my full review on the improved version too.

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Frenzy responds:

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